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What's my signal for distress?
Silence
no steam from my ears
nothing visible
a Possible furrow in my eyebrow
all Internal pressure
building
building until....
I Snap
eXpLoDe!
i'm a Maniac
and when the small moment occurs
when one little or big thing
pushes me over the edge
a rush
Emotions pile upon Feelings
Anger
Love
Hatres
Happiness....
the list builds till
PooF! they're gone
and then the Tears
a Rainfall of after thoughts to
my mental breakdown
and a healthy recovery- Sleep
i wake up Refreshed.

------
*laura*


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