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Racking my brain
Weighing my heart
it's a burden-
my own stupidity created
Something to mock me and
hold me responsible for
unnecessary action.


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The following comments are for "guilt"
by englishgal16

self torture

Nice little peice, you answer your own question. We are the only ones that can get rid of the state of being "guilty". There is no need for self torture.


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: July 23, 2005 )

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