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Second guessing on the choices i've made
Not the love of my life. no,
just a friendship that sparked
the heat got high and a
flame burst.
Well that flame is dying.
I feel it
an absence of warth is
apparent as the cold
begins to consume me.
Tears have not yet sprung,
but when they do, it
won't be long till they are
frozen hard as ice.


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