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Awake she shall
of wanderlust sigh
of wondrous
Why

And awake she shall
taken by word of
summer
of love spent
and of a tear
lent

And awake
There be no tomorrow

No loss, no tear
No why,
No you
And with no I

Wander she shall
With wanderlust sigh
With a tear,
A plentiful tear
Spent

Wasted with wondrous
Why?



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