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Heated and sun stroked
Sweaty and a little bit stinky
Sun burned with bright red skin
Bathing suits that stay down in the wind

Sand and the ocean
The beach and volleyball
A hot dog vendor with pretzels
Towels wrapped tight around our waists

Those days
Used to be so great

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~ Brandan Michael.


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The following comments are for "Forgotten Days"
by fbomber125

Forgotten Days
I love this poem, it is full of everything that is good about being young.

( Posted by: 0207070 [Member] On: July 19, 2005 )





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