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This is a sort of advanced warning. 'Dennis The Peacemaker' will be running alongside 'Klang' on totally different tracks as far as their 'realities' are concerned.

Anyway, my inspiration for 'Dennis' kinda stems from a somewhat disorderly conversation on Thursday with a group of friends. We'd decided to hang around in a cafe-bar, supping cocktails from jugs and generally putting the world to rights - we failed and God knows we tried for three hours. A good friend of ours had just finished a poetry reading in Manchester Library and needed the juice of the grape to fortify her.
We seemed to change seats every so often and I found myself discussing the 7/7 and 9/11 attacks with a friend who advised against trying to make sense of them shortly before going doo-lally. Another dismal failure then, but it did spark off an idea for a storyline.
Since reading DrSoos excellent Turban of Time series, I've been dying for an inspiration to do similar, I failed again.
However, I hope you enjoy 'Dennis The Peacemaker' and would really welcome any feedback. I can't say this often enough, feedback is the lifeblood of writing. A writer can go rambling on, completely unaware that he might need to revise his work. I always pay heed to criticism and look forward to hearing from everybody.

Paul the Ogg

In five hundred years time, most of us will be forgotten dust. But Hitler will still be remembered, God loves irony.

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