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Within lunacy;
At the height of ejaculation,
Apowerful inebriation of the mind and body
Knew not it existed.

Courageously afraid;
Quiet and misunderstood
An insult to an intelligence
That silently ponders the unheard.

An impervious ego
Dissects its creativity didengaging comradery
In an art scheme yet unnamed

Masochistic foreplay
Maybe another day
Sleep falls fast on passion for gluttons
Who glutton the passion of everyday misgivings
Seeking instant gratification
Instead of just living.

Who can blame the blind man?
Someone....yes, someone can.


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