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Lost time
Stolen kisses
Misrepresented intentions
Deciphered the same
No emotions refrained

A happiness
Must coexist
With a slap on the wrist
Decide tomorrow today
They say

Intuit suffers
For being low maintenance
Appealing to srangers
who needs a needy mistaker
A happiness faker

Using labels
Instead of words
Makes the difference between
Who has the loudest voice
And who cleans up afterwards

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