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Rhyming is a game that has no aim
It's brings no fame and that's a shame
Give me a dime for every rhyme
And the best will be, my very lines

Andy G. Pun Sin

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The following comments are for "Rhyming my way to fame"
by andyps

fame, yeah right

Damn skippy on that one! You know none of us will get rich unless we write a cliché infested bestseller about something stupid like how to plan a wedding, or how to shoot-up botox. I like your poem, it is truthful.


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: July 16, 2005 )

Men are from Mars, Women are from Uranus
Cute poem. Andy. Very true and fun.

macbeth, you're damn right. None of us will get rich unless we start writing crap! While I maybe doing that already, you've inspired me to start writing a book poking gentle fun at the differences between men and women all the while trying to teach us how to 'understand' each other.


( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: July 17, 2005 )

this will not stop me from writing
I like this poem: it's short but it tells a truth understood by all writers (established or beginners).

I'm bothered though by the "It's" in your second line.


( Posted by: Jabeelah [Member] On: July 20, 2005 )

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