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I tried to sell my soul to the Devil when I was eight. I was sick of being teased and pushed around by my brothers. I told them that they'd be sorry and ran out of the living room where they kept changing the television program that I was watching. I truned out the light and locked the bathroom door. I kneeled in front of the toilet on grimy tile and put my open palms together in the universal praying manner. Then instead of my fingers pointed upright to Heaven; I twisted my wristsw downward toward Hell. (How creative of me.) I told Lucifer to take my brothers away and he can have my immortal soul. (I was raised in a strict Roman Catholic family.) What did and eight-year-old child need with an innocent, lilly white soul when I had television. Satan must have thought it was a stale deal. The bastard never showed.

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The following comments are for "Satan Never Showed"

will he show?

I guess you have to believe in that sorta stuff for you to wish for it to appear. I was raised Catholic too and...anyway, that's my comment for now but I liked your rant.


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: July 13, 2005 )

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