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Author's Note:
an excerpt from Innocent (a collection of poems in progress)




WHAT’S YOUR FAVORITE COLOR
IN THE LIFE BOAT
WE ARE ALL THE SAME

[11/07/05]









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"...with a shot of gin
a night of rowdiness
stars fall from the sky

Drinking heavily from sky's thunder
heart shattered by lightning
I burst into laughter"

--Georges Bataille


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The following comments are for "EYES: TRUNCATED IN WATER"
by poliArch

We're all the same
in the boat of life? No male and female, no black or white? Your view is changed (or should be) when you consider us all in that light?

How're my doing, close? -Philo

( Posted by: Philo [Member] On: July 14, 2005 )

in any light
Philo, bravo! The theme to this piece is essentially that: in the grand scheme of things we are essentially all the same. However what we all need to strive for is to see that in any light.

( Posted by: poliArch [Member] On: July 15, 2005 )

Light
PoliArch;
I am awed by your poetry! gonna read some more of it later on...



Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: January 14, 2006 )

Thanks Jeannie
Thanks for stopping by and leaving your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. take care,

Lino

( Posted by: poliarch [Member] On: January 17, 2006 )





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