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I've got time
Time to will
And I will
As I spill
On out into a wordless street.
How do I describe?
When words fail
to see what I need to say.
Silence speaks golden
Heavy with the years
Common sense is gone,
No connection to myself
Or anyone else
and I say now
With a smile,
"How could I resist?"
"When it's right there in front of me?"



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The following comments are for "I've got time"
by Tylendal

good
i like ur style and skill
it's different and unique ya know?
keep up the good work

( Posted by: fbomber125 [Member] On: July 12, 2005 )





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