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My dreams have decomposed,
attracting flies to the scene,
and I don't want an ever after,
it's just a little time I need.

It's not true that I'm blue,
and though I'm green,
I'm hardly new.
Today's just another Emerald View,
from my sane, jaded point of view.

I tune to Dan The Weatherman,
though what he says means much the same.
If it's rain, it's Brut champagne...
but if it's sun,
it's something harder.

My dreams have decomposed,
attracting flies to the scene,
and I don't want an ever-after,
it's just a little time I need.



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The following comments are for "Just A Little Time"
by seanspacey

Sean's time...
Your word skill is incredible and your style unique. I always come away from your words knowing I will return to get something more from them on each reading. This was perfectly formed, perfectly written and just a sheer delight to sing in my head. Great words Sean. Namaste

( Posted by: tinalouise [Member] On: July 13, 2005 )

Tina
Much thanks for the encouragement. I've started a commercial writing job; I hope I manage to hold it. I am rather dexterous at the superficial aspects of language. But it's only much more rarely, in works like "African Grey Parrot" or "The Meaning of Life," that I'm able to use language to communicate a truly important message.
How's life treating you? Feel free to drop me a line at seanspacey@hotmail.com, preferably with a subject like "tina from lit.org"

( Posted by: seanspacey [Member] On: July 14, 2005 )





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