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your importance to me
I only know that whereas
I could not care less what most think,
the thought of your poor opinion scares me
near to death.
The thought of hurting you
hurts me more.
A glimpse of life without you
frightens me.
You are a pillar
More than a pillar,
perhaps most of the foundation
At times you make me want to demolish
the building and start over
but the beauty of the architecture we've made
outlasts those temper tantrums
My sky would fall
were you removed from my world
the ground would swallow me whole
and yet you smile, and wave
as you disappear from view
would you miss me the same if I
were the one leaving?
A day, a week, and yet
eternity without you
I stand unsure of my importance in your world.

Jewel L

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