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okay, hey guys, ummm the guy who wrote this poem doesn't have an account at this site but would love to hear your critiques. This is his first and only poem so I hope you guys are honest and enjoy. Even the gloomy poems have a story to tell.

Once again I was all alone
Wondering why I didn't take what I was shone
I fell to one knee in deep dismay
Knowing the pain would never go away
Slipping deep into my own abyss
Dying steadily wondering all that I would miss
Unconsciousness was taking me in the darkness of night
Trying to awaken, trying to fight
All was hopelessly starting to fall
I didn't want to lose it all
Selflessness taking all of my best
Trying not to lose the rest
In this act I lost all I was shone
Once again I was all alone

Thanks for reading, don't forget to comment... lots of love and peace! MUAH!@{~ SuGa

Thanks for taking the time to read my poems. Much love kiddos and I hope my poems meant something to you! Never give up on your dreams :)

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