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To the city grey,
wound,
with oak cognition
bound.

To the city grey,
pace,
with iron ethic
state.

To the city grey,
track,
with swivel traits
waxed.

To the city grey.

To the city way.

I've come to stray.


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by matt73

on A City Stray
This is one cool poem. I like the style you've used here. Nicely done. Bare bones with vivid images. Great read!

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: July 10, 2005 )





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