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Thunder booms, echoes, and
rolls across two horizons,
while neurotic bolts of
jagged light flash in both
my exterior and interior worlds.
Strong storms rage on two fronts.

Winds gust all around
blasting liquid sheets and
frigid ice stones outside,
while waves of fears,
doubts and downpours of
whirling emotions storm
within my mind.

The external elements
energize their fury
into a fever pitch with
rapid multiple light and
sonic boom explosions,
just like the numerous
parallel twin turbulences so
harshly pounding my quickly
wavering perceptions and soul.

Randy Snow

(Copyright 2005 by Randy Snow)

Randy Snow

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