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I've been catching the scent of my dad's office from time to time, just breathing. It reminds me of when I used to have to vacuum it at night, after it closed. I would sit at the secretary's desk and masturbate while staring at a framed picture of her, and perhaps her sister.
I was ohnly like thirteen and chronic masturbation in unordinary areas was extremely exciting to me. If I still had the seeds of a concious aware god I didn't mind him watching. After all, if hil little creations weren't supposed to pleasure themselves, then why would our hands dangle evenly sith our privat memvers?


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The following comments are for "chronic masturbation"
by BAAL

Humm
Is this typo'd with purpose, or were you just negligent? Either way, this was amusing, though I was hoping for a bit more. You know you jerk off too much when you assess the sexually potency of items in the produce section and fantasize about the nice fat hole that your Drill Master 7000 (tm) could make in that watermelon over there. What fun.

Andy

( Posted by: strangedaze [Member] On: July 1, 2005 )

re: cleaned up
I cleaned up this post. Too much fighting and bickering. Please remember to critique the work. Any attacking of members will not be tolerated.

( Posted by: Chrispian [Admin] On: July 2, 2005 )

Masturbating is bliss
I think what the author is trying to say is:

Masturbating is a beautiful thing that should be acknowledged by mankind, and not shunned for being an "immoral act of pleasure."

How many men must suffer regret after a nice night of rubbing one out? When will it be enough? Times are changing folks, and we need to stop ignoring masturbation and start accepting it. I'm going to go jack off now for the sake of this brilliant piece of literature!

( Posted by: DirtySyko [Member] On: July 3, 2005 )

Dirty
Preach on.

Let's all unzip are pants to show our support ;)

Andy

( Posted by: strangedaze [Member] On: July 4, 2005 )

Nothing Wrong With One-Handed Typing
And aside from that, the only thing really wrong with typos is that they wind up being more distracting than a photo of your dad's secretary's sister.

This is a really interesting story idea. I find myself agreing with StrangeDAndy, here -- it's too good to be left at rest with just this. I really wish you'd gone just a little farther, disclosed a little more (popcorn and no butter? so cruel)

Still, I'm intigued, and, so long as I'm around, I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your work.

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: July 13, 2005 )





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