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Adieu


Cast your judgments on me
Quit your games and say you hate,
Hate this, hate that
Spear me not. Relish in your bliss
Why in your eyes is complication a must?
Donít leave me to assume, what you assume about us.

You see yourself in a world of gods
But I shall not be a sacrifice
And as you say these things, well aware plagued, I wonder
Shall I again tear?
O self-proclaimed gods
Send me once again into a blasphemous state
Let me know you exist
Grant me peace and ignorant happiness
And let me part, with humility and honor yours.


------
jdjb


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The following comments are for "Adieu"
by fcukedupboi

good,
I think this poem is really deep:) thats cool, I started writing poetry, then got into storys, I think you're really good at it. so keep writing:)

( Posted by: starmaiden [Member] On: June 28, 2005 )





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