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The view is skewed and you canít see through
so what youíre thinking now is probably not true.
The rules we choose to use are justified
but to lose our rues is what we must do.
Perception is just a reflection,
of the outside infection,
and that doesnít reveal the true intention of our connection.
Perfection lies underneath,
and seeps into the deep wholesome fibers,
that only true survivors ever mention.
So in the midst of the scene, remember our dream,
and know reality is not always what it seems.

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