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Sultry and sexy
you come to me,
moaning my name;
sighing passionately.

Enmeshed in love
we writhe and kiss,
so urgent the need,
craving the bliss.

Sated and sweaty
basking in love's glow,
the need builds again,
I love you so.



------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "Sultry and Sexy"
by Char

I feel it
You cut right to the heart of sensuality. Written very elegantly.

( Posted by: BAAL [Member] On: June 27, 2005 )

Char, Sultry, Sexy, nice
The first time I ever read this, I liked it so much, that now reading it again on this site, I like it even more.

You ARE by far the Queen of Brevity. Well done, as BAAL said "You cut right to the heart of sensuality" and you do it SO well.

Thanks for sharing this,
Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 27, 2005 )

My Thanks...
BAAL and Dar for the nice comments. I do try to be concise and to the point. It's nice to know the 'Queen' still reigns...LOL!!!

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: June 27, 2005 )

Brevity
Ditto

( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: June 28, 2005 )

Thanks
Emlyn. I appreciate your comment. I like your avatar too; it brings a smile to my face.

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: June 28, 2005 )

Mmmmmmm...
Yes... yes... yes...
"We writhe and kiss" is perfect.
"So URGENT the need." I'm writhing right now.
"The need builds again". Aaah! Truly,more is more.
Aaarg! Somebody help me! With the way you write, I should change my middle name to Pavlov. Such
soulful lust! Slurp-gurgle-gulp...mmmmmmm.

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: July 17, 2005 )

Thank You Met
Glad I got through and judging from your comment, I kicked-in the door. Thank you for reading and commenting. It's good to hear from you. Pavlov would be a good middle name too....LOL!!!

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: July 17, 2005 )





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