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Kiss my hungry lips
set my soul on fire,
You're my one and only;
no other do I desire.

Feel my need for you
as you gaze into my eyes,
can you see the passion
hear its echo in my sighs?



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I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "The Need"
by Char

Wow another hot one Char,
What more can I say? No matter the choice of subject you choose, you have a beautiful voice doll. Nice one.

Dar ;)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 27, 2005 )

Thanks Dar
I am glad you like it. Thanks for viewing and commenting.


Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: June 27, 2005 )





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