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Bedroom shades open
rotund woman runs naked
peepers scream-go blind

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Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "My Eyes! My Eyes!"
by Nitz Kitty

Voyeuristic Blindness
Kacee- My gut! My gut!...From laughing...

Nicely done...
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 26, 2005 )

Going blind
Pen and Bobby...I'm glad this piece made you laugh...I always said if anyone saw me naked they would go blind...so I decided to write this...thanks for taking the time to read and comment...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: June 26, 2005 )

KACEE!
My eyes! You are too much.. U got me crying here.
You are good people.


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: June 27, 2005 )

My Eyes
I'm glad you stopped by to read and make a comment.....also glad you liked it...but seriously...I always have clothes on ...I don't want to take a chance on going blind...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: June 27, 2005 )

Peeping Gone
I'll never look through my telescope the same way again.

Nicely done.
Emlyn

( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: June 28, 2005 )

Emlyn
Thanks for reading and commenting on my work...I hope it made you smile...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: June 28, 2005 )

Who is it
Tell me please so I will not look. Another top skivvie one as always.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: June 29, 2005 )

Kacee and peepers
Well I just don't know how better a tiny cloth for you to weave then this....hope it covers you well, but you sure do not look "ROTOUND"
All the same Kacee this is quite jovial, thanks for letting us Peek into your little world...
Loved this one,
Dar :) :) :)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 29, 2005 )

It's me!
Thanks Chris and Dar for the comments and Teflon and Chris for the ratings...you know me always out there for that laugh...and it doesn't hurt you either...
Dar, I do mean me...I've changed somewhat from the girl at the senior prom...my body has given in to gravity...and I started growing out instead of growing up...at least I haven't started swrinking ,yet....Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: June 29, 2005 )

peeperZ
Really nice. LOL. This gets you imagining real hard

( Posted by: seyekuyinu [Member] On: July 8, 2005 )

The title
Even the title makes you blind. Good Imagery

( Posted by: seyekuyinu [Member] On: July 8, 2005 )

seykuyinu
Thank you so much for your very kind comments...I'm glad I could bring LOL into your life...be it only for a brief second...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: July 8, 2005 )

KaceeKITTY...
hey Butterfly...smile I am! "Myku" in the making.
I see it, a book and sell a zillion copies!

Kacee, I feel honored, HI MAMA!

Thanks for the smiles...

justrobin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: July 10, 2005 )

Robin
Thanks ever so for the kind comment...I have no idea where these things come from...It would be nice to have a book someday...but as of now ...it's on the back burner...Ka Ma Ma

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: July 11, 2005 )

Ka Ma Ma...
love and all that good stuff! book in making,
dear...Kitty Myku, thanks so much to the Creator, that I hit you first on this site...

love you...Robin...and alway's the smiles!

Robinbird

( Posted by: robinbird [Member] On: July 11, 2005 )

Kacee
Darn it! wish I'd thought of this one. It is Heeelarious. You been peepin' Tomin' on me?

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: July 11, 2005 )

Charley
Thanks for reading and commenting...I don't know where it came from...out there somewhere...then into my head ...It means alot to me to have someone as creative as yourself make a comment on my work...I love your Hillbilly Chronicles...Kacee
ps...no, Charley ....I'm not a peeper...hehe

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: July 12, 2005 )

Robin on My Eyes
Precious Robin child...I'm glad God brought us together also...He has His reasons...even if we don't know what they are...hope you get your pc running ...I miss your myku...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: July 12, 2005 )





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