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Once a pone a time there was a small girl name Mattie.Her family had moved from the city to a small town.At first she was so excited to move to her new home.She loves the brand new bedroom.The sun shined right into her room from the big window.Just outside the big window Mattie seen the dark woods.A first it was fine with Mattie the woods was not so bad looking.But the sun sat and darkness was everywhere.Mattie had never seen darkness like this.The city she grew up in there was always light.She begain to get ready for bed she thought of how dark the woods looked.Mattie's mother and father came to tuck her in.Mattie thought she was to big to be tuck in.But her mother and father had always tucked her in bed.AS all the lights went off one by one Mattie thought of the dark woods.She just couldn't get the woods off her mind.Mattie tried singing her self to sleep.Then she thought of nanny,her nanny always told her she counted sheep.So Mattie tried counting sheep one,two,three well that wasn't working.Mattie thought of a drink of water,but she was so scared she couldn't move.Mattie seen the moon shining so brite it was all most like the city.As she fell a sleep mattie begain to dream.When the moon shines the goldfish fly,the butterflies talk and the fireflies dance.The caterpillars sing,grasshoppers play the music.Ants bring a picknick down by the pond.And ladybugs do thier thing.LA LA LA LA That when the moon shines.Mattie open her eyes early in the morning ran to her window seen the woods.They did seam so dark to her anymore.Mattie smiled out the window she knows what happens when the moon shines.The goldfish fly,butterflies talk,fireflies dance and caterpillars sing LA LA LA LA

Tina Freeman


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