In the Nude
by williamhill (Member) - published: June 25, 2005
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Category - Haiku
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Naked aggression
is there any other kind
put some clothes on please

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The following comments are for "In the Nude"
by williamhill

Nude is good
Charlie, I have to say I got a chuckle out of this one. Short and straight to the point. Almost like being naked.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: June 25, 2005 )

Henry Youngman
Makes me mindful of Henry Youngman's classic "Haiku" joke line: "Take my wife --- please!" Oh, I've been there, William -- thank you for reminding me -- and for making me laugh.

( Posted by: Lapwing [Member] On: June 25, 2005 )

on Naked Aggression
Cute Quip. Bonus factor is if you read it as an acrostic it says "NIP".

lol!!

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: June 25, 2005 )

naked
Thanks for the laugh. I thought of Homer Simpson when I read this! (not an insult, btw)

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: June 25, 2005 )

Sadomasochistic Black Ops
...They're covered.

Nice compression.
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 25, 2005 )

unclothed agression

I have to admit I liked this one, with or without clothes.

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: June 26, 2005 )

Covered up, Homer
Glad to make you laugh, Nae.

Henny Youngman had a million of these.I loved his dry wit and delivery. Thanks for readin',Lapwing.

GG, You'll have to get ahold of Bobby for a senyru to finish the acrostic. I'm sure he is up to it. Thanks.

Looks like I hit a Homer,huh, Viper? Politics aside. Later.

Men in black hats. Good guys or bad guys. Who knows? Thanks, Robert.

Thanks a lot, Macbeth. Been readin' your stuff. Very intense.

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: June 26, 2005 )

on The Hill
Interesting thought, WH, but why toss the idea off on someone else? ;)

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: June 26, 2005 )

Naked Hill
GG. My abilities are limited,especially when it comes to haiku. There are a few folks(like Bobby) who have a real knack for the form. When I come up with a haiku, it is something immediate in my mind. I haven't been able to do them consistantly. And some of them are or would be considered "American Sentences" a la Ginsberg. The haiku world is a sensitive bunch. I try not to tread there too much. Hope that helps.

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: June 26, 2005 )

Sharp
Wow, that was sharp. A girl to a guy right?

( Posted by: seyekuyinu [Member] On: July 8, 2005 )

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