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[i]I'd never seen an angel with a smile so sweet
And as you beat your wings you blew me off my feet
You blew me far away
As I skidded 'long on my seat
...But don't demons have wings, too?
And thousands of shiny teeth?[/i]

Fields of Flora

[i]Sun Flora, sun Flora! Do you even know?
Your face follows the spotlight
Everywhere it goes.

Sun Flora, Sun Flora! Do you even know?
I was the only soil
That gave you chance to grow[/i]

'Wrinkles' in your brow which 'made you look older'
The beauty that you bore was a burden on your shoulders
The mounds of make up to cover a blemish on a face
Now comfortably hidden in my neck's nape

While moistening my shoulders with salty springs of tears
You shedded your satin hair with talk of pregnancy scares
Snat and smudged lipstick and freely running mascara
But how could I ever trust you when you're such a good actor

[i]I remember you in action
And you look better in stills
And you remind me of the fact
That I still swallow pills

"And though I still miss her
So much it makes me ill
I know this was just a movie
So I know it wasn't real"

Sun Flora, Sun Flora! Do you even know?
You're always the brightest sunflower
In any of the rows

Sun Flora, Sun Flora! Do you even know?
That all your petals shiver
When the slightest wind blows?[/i]

You were twig in a tornado, you bitter scatterbrain
So indescribably indecisive and it drove me insane
I seemed as if you loved to lounge in this emotional cesspit
But I still wanted you...
Does that make me desperate?

Damned if we couldn't
Damned if we don't
Damned if we didn't
Damned if we won't
Flora, you were the finest
...full of finesse
A Sparkling diamond
Truly the best

[i]I remember you in action
But you look better in stills
But I can't face the fact
That you still give me chills

"And though I still miss her
And although I still feel
She's just an actor in a picture
And a poser on film"[/i]

[b]Sun flora, Sun Flora! Do you even care?
I was always around
While he was never there

Sun flora, Sun flora! Do You even care!?
I was the one who loved you
When you lost your hair[/b]

Alex, The boy full of ideas

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