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He whisper in my ears words I've longed to hear.
He touched my skin in every caress I felt it to be real.
We laughed and cried until one day I've noticed a flaw.
There is no longer a smile in his eyes.
His laughter is no longer mine.
Reality is so cruel.
I'm singing solo instead of a duet.

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The following comments are for "Broken Hearted"
by May2242

Some thing for you
hi there,
From a writer to a writer:
I really appreciate your poem, the only problem is it's too short. Personally I am a fan of "broken hearts" theme and I found your quite unique and good. Continue writing more sad and tear flowing peoms ok.
More power and good day


( Posted by: RedAngel [Member] On: July 24, 2005 )

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