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Leave me in a girlie world
filled with pink, satin, and lace.

Love the salon,
one day soft and curly
next day sleek and straight
when in the mood something in between.

Manicures: french or red
because polished hands demand respect.
Pedicures: simply stated "one word perfection".

Perfume
make up
Cosmo
or flowers
made to cater,
pamper or baby us
make us happy and
bring good luck
but my personal favorite:
things that make men blush.

Glitter
gold
and frilly things
make a woman feel sexy

so...

We can get down and dirty in
a manís world.



------
I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "Girlie World"
by nae411

On Satin Sheets..
Renae- Holy Cannoli!...Enjoyable read, with "happy ending!"

Smiling,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 23, 2005 )

Get Down , Girl
This is what I would call a something else poem...Go get 'em...Loved it Nae...as usual...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: June 23, 2005 )

Bobby, Kacee, and Vodka
I wasn't going to post this, I was so embarrassed. I was being silly. Glad you enjoyed, lol.

And Miss V, I just got back from having a massage. Are you peaking?????


Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 23, 2005 )

ahh poor Vodka...
Muah (that is supposed to be a kiss) not on the ass, lol. Sorry just being honest. Next massage I take you with me, how's that????

Meow ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 23, 2005 )

Hottie Naughtie world.....
Nae, Nae, Nae, what are we going to do with you?

Well I almost left a comment on one you had read 10 times!!! had it written, 10 times, do you go over everything THAT good, when it feels so good too??

but I stopped myself.

Geez, give me a good muscle shirt, leather pants, Harley boots, hat, and my motorocycle, and I FEEL good!!!!!!!

(mind you I have lacey sexy undies.....)

And I don't own a Harley, just a dream with my dream tatoos.

Aside from all this, you did a nice job Nae, inspite of what ANYONE person says this is NOT a pat on the back..........sheeze, need to stop telling people HOW to comment...

You did the job you planned to do....Satin and Lace, with such a pretty face....

Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 23, 2005 )

Miss Dareva !!!
Do with me??? (Batting eyelashes) Whatever you want of course (laughing). You are too funny Dar. I am not the motorcycle kind of gal, well not yet anyway. Will save that adventure for another day. Actually my hubby took me riding about a year ago and I can't begin to tell you what a chicken I was. Makes me mad, hate to be a girlie girl, lol.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 23, 2005 )

cool
Nice write up Nae.

( Posted by: Raejon [Member] On: June 29, 2005 )

Yes.
I think i may have to go and read the quilt. It looks warm and cosy.

( Posted by: Raejon [Member] On: June 29, 2005 )

Sugar and Spice
Nae,

I've read this many times, and I think initially I didn't want to say I loved it for fear I'd have to admit how truly girlie I am myself... lol

You have the essence of "Charlie" or "Luvs Baby Soft" in here! Very, Very Cute!

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: June 29, 2005 )

Girls, girls, girls!!!!
Miss Vodka, oh yee of little faith... Must feel to believe, lol.

Raejon, well look what the cat drug in. So awesome to see your name here Mouse, you've been missed. I feel like I just discovered lit reading your comment (s)!!! Welcome home and thank you!

Miss Gigi, girl be proud of being girlie. Is there any other way to be? (wink) And for the record I wore "Loves baby soft" as a young girl. Maybe that is the connection, lol.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 29, 2005 )

Dull maleness
Good poem with a good ending. I look at my dull maleness in a mirror and your poem almost makes me yearn to be a girlie girl, at least for a moment. Maybe I could be an honorary, temporary girlie girl? Pretty please? Of course, I am aware that what is important lays between the ears and beats within the chest. I'm no ditz!

Brave of you to post this piece - you could have taken some flak.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: June 29, 2005 )

Gomar and girls...
Gomar, we could make you a honorary girlie girl but honestly do you think you could make it??? It isn't all frills being a girl you know. And yes I suppose I could have taken some flak but it was all in good fun. Thanks for reading and let me know if the moment was worth it.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: June 29, 2005 )

Nae - girlie
Can I jump in and join the girls? I just wore mudpack last night, would that be enough a passport to your g-club? I realized mudpacks could make one dizzy and sleepy, is that really so? I must ask around, but the office is not good a place for such queries hehehe... :) Nice, fun read Pal!

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: June 30, 2005 )





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