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From my bed I watch,
As others march,
To the old ways,
I count the days,
For Death to call,
Not for all,
But me,
To unite us,
The one day I can rest,
I don't know who too trust,
Only to seek to kill,
Scythe in hand,
Blood on sand,
Time will tell,
If I'm Death's will


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