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Oh Bonfire!

How the flames must be warm!
It would melt the coldness within
How the warmth must be soothing!
It would crack through my defenses

Oh Bonfire! Great flames
You twist and jump
You enchant and you trance
Unto your spell I want to dance

And yet I stop.

I touch upon my chest a burn
Whispers of the music haunts
Smoky embers rekindled in my mind
Absence of that warmth freezes

Oh Bonfire! How tempting
But I shall watch you from afar

When your flames die
I will not mourn
When you are but ashes
I will be intact

And yet.

How the flames must be warm!
It would melt the coldness within
How the warmth must be soothing!
It would crack through my defenses

//KS*6-21-2005

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~A~
For my eternal muse... We are of one heart... Forever



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by maimai

There is a Higher Fire
Make a bonfire of your possessions...
And dance with the whipping flames

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: November 22, 2012 )





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