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Mind

portrait fades

mouth with no curve

Blurred colors


Hand

A pencil

sketches fervently

charcoal results


Heart

A lasting etch

blisters




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The following comments are for "The way it is"
by greatsmile

dear greatsmile,
I just read your poem.

I liked your poem.

it's different.

isn't it?

john.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: June 19, 2005 )

you are right
It is not the same :)

( Posted by: greatsmile [Member] On: June 19, 2005 )





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