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every heard of highway pirates? like on the way to vegas thru the desert on the 15. pretty fuckin cool except for the murder thing. i mean, thats brutal shit, you know? not just to rob someone, but to run them off the road first and then kill em afterward with no hesitation cos its part of the job desription? they gotta be some crazy ass gypsy motherfuckers all livin out in the desert organizing this shit. i can just picture the whole scenario, you know? u got people scoping out the highway for a couple miles north and a couple miles south, lookin out for cops or whatever. then you got the car thats gonna run the other car off the road and the people inside thatr gonna rob the victims. so u gotta run the car off in the designated area or fake a collision or whatever to get em to stop. u gotta either shoot the people or hold them at gunpoint and then they'll start freakin out. if u kill them u gotta pick which one goes first and then everyone else has to watch someone they possibly love die as their lives flash before their eyes. then pirates gotta separate the bodies from the car. dump the bodies further out in the desert so theres less chance of finding them. pass by other places where there's still bodies that only they know about. they gotta keep up on the news cos they wont wanna be around the places the cops might be setting traps for them. they prolly sell the cars to chop shops. i mean, leaving an abandoned car is a huge red flag and it'd be wasting a lot of money too. just think about it. you're goin to vegas for your 21st and u only make it to victorville where your raped corspe's only friends are hungry carrion.


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