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Rendered force,
Walking day and night unseen,
My holy father is.

My holy father is,
another god to be found,
walking day and night.

Walking day and night,
footsteps on rocky pavement,
is my holy father.

Is my holy father,
creating day and night for us,
walking beside me?

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by Siah

Holy Father
I have used subjects of faith in poetry in blank, or free, verse, only. Haiku is a form that I never thought of using. You have done an excellent job.

( Posted by: Dfortyseven [Member] On: June 18, 2005 )

I ahve been trying to find my way in all this turmoil of faith and religion. Each haiku shows my subtle change through out the days

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: June 19, 2005 )

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