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One dream, turned aside;
A new one, sure to follow;
Farewell, one-horse town!

'He who knows others is learned. He who knows himself is wise.'
-Lao Tzu

'Tomorrow will take us away,
Far from home--
No one will ever know our names,
But the bards' songs will remain.
Tomorrow, all will be known,
And You're not alone,
So don't be afraid
In the dark and cold
'Cause the bards' songs will remain.
They all will remain
In my thoughts and in my dreams
They're always in my mind....
Come close Your eyes;
You can see them, too.'
Blind Guardian,
The Bard's Song: Into the Forest

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The following comments are for "dedicated to my brother, the Promethean Proffet, 2 of 2"
by the Co.konspirator

Short and Simple (PG 13 comment)
This poem reminded me of an orgasm. It didn't last long, but damn did it feel good until it passed.

( Posted by: MKMINION [Member] On: July 14, 2002 )

Thank you for the comment...I are very odd...

( Posted by: the Co.konspirator [Member] On: July 23, 2002 )

Caught this one Randon reading and had to say i like the simplicity of the haiku to express the nature of growing out of the place you grew up. You should write these little gems more often.

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: May 7, 2003 )

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