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Beware the little old women!
Their words may seem destructive
and their tongues are sharp as knives.

Beware the little old women!
Don't be fooled; they're wise as serpents, crafty and cunning; they know just what to say and how to say it. Listen to them and they'll turn your world upside down.

Beware the little old women!
Oh, don't be concerned!
They don't mean any harm. Just listen; they'll change your world-view for good!

------
Keith


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The following comments are for "Little Old Women"
by Dfortyseven

old women
and the three faces of eve smoking that subliminal corn pipe at the old Kentucky home!

( Posted by: Dfortyeight [Member] On: June 17, 2005 )

Keith's Little Old Women
Keith,

I think you may be on to something, but it needs to be fleshed out a little further. Leaves a lot to the imagination, but perhaps a little too much. Could use some more concrete images to go with the rhetoric (not bad, just the way it's said).

Dfortyeight. Odd. And I don't get it.

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: June 17, 2005 )





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