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This one might be a ringer to all those who have loved...someone they shouldn't have loved...

Iím sorry for all Iíve done,
I hate that I have pained you,
Especially since youíre my sun,
And I promised never to,
I shouldnít have expressed it,
Iím really sorry my love,
I shouldnít have expressed love lit,
I never meant to hurt you my dove,
But donít think I regret anything,
Friendship I have had and lost,
But yours makes me sing,
And I will keep it at any cost,
So while I write this to calm my nerves,
I try to remember a simple slow dance
All while my heart twists and swerves,
It was weird while we were in a trance,
That it felt uncomfortable is wrong,
I shouldnít have ever been your moon,
Yet I havenít felt like this for long,
But I really want to be with you soon,
And I have already changed within,
Adapting to certain emotions,
I will do anything to not go thin,
I will continue through all motions,
To ensure that we will always exist,
As friends, lovers, but nothing other,
Because I want nothing missed,
And I want us to see one another,
I believe in destiny and fate,
My fate is to be your friend,
And your destiny of late,
Is to be accompanied by my wind,
So we can always be together,
I know now that we can go through a lot,
We can bear through any weather,
Now I know: I love you more than I thought.


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Art is addicting, an addict am I,
truth is I, the truth am I, the truth a lie!


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The following comments are for "Sunny Thoughts"
by Siah

Sunny Thoughts
Very well-written, well-planned. The title contrasts perfectly with the content.

( Posted by: Dfortyseven [Member] On: June 18, 2005 )

nice redemption

I love this, it flows well, and it is what every woman/man wants to hear, and very nicely put together.

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: June 18, 2005 )

Sunny
Well yes, I had to think a little bit positive about this right?

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: June 19, 2005 )





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