Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

Upon rocky shores
hand in hand
we travel,
as day after day
our lives unravel.

Each new day
is a wonderous gift
and one by one
through pebbles
we sift.

One day the
journey will end,
the boulders will
crumble for us,
my friend-

But until the stony
path runs out
together we will
roam; without a doubt.




------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Hand In Hand"
by Char

Hand In Hand, very nice
Tightly written. Without a doubt, you are one of my favorite poets/writers/musicians/aritsts. I feel blessed to know you outside of this Lit world for all the beautiful talents you have shared with me.
I am forever grateful too that you brought me into this Lit-tle world. Thanks Char.

This is a wonderful poem. You have an amazing way of writing.

Megwetch,
Dar

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 15, 2005 )

Thank You...
So much Dar. How sweet you are. I appreciate your time and thoughts. I am happy you are a fan. :)

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: June 15, 2005 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: