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A chance glimpse-
and forever is caught
one more
who's esprit
now lies in the rapture
of divine eyes

A psychedelic universe
where euphoria
dances in ecstasy
on the blood
of malignity
and the sorrow
so heavenly, helplessly
trapped betwixt

Yet romantic light
trinkles out invitingly
again and again
so intoxicatingly...
and the Rapture
reveals the intricate truth
woven into the labyrinth
of the Divine Eyes


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The following comments are for "Divine Eyes"
by Cryptic Rapture

good good
hey, this is good stuff i really like the picture you painted. it seeps through the words like butta. i like the third stanza, its the strongest and i enjoyed the ending.

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: June 14, 2005 )





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