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In turmoil and chaos
confusion casts its
spoils of dank and
gloomy tendrils
upon the land,
asserting misty
corners we don't
understand.
To throw us
off track to keep us
in fear, perhaps to
balance our step from
too much cheer.



------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "Confusion"
by Char

been there
sounds like something I'd write after getting to drunk and waking up w/ sun in my eyes and a hangover. Keep it up.

( Posted by: bhagwandave [Member] On: June 14, 2005 )

I'm confused....
and YOU captured this thought-provoking poem with a great tightness, brevity is yours. Deserving lots of reads on this one.

AND Charli, this is wonderful to have you here in Lit.....glad you found a few moments in your busy schedule!

Dar~

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 14, 2005 )

Thank You
Thank you: bhagwandave,tinalouise,Penelope,Dareva, and rcallaci for stopping to read this and making such nice comments. It cleared the confusion as to whether this was worth a nickel....LOL!!! I DO appreciate it everyone.

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: June 15, 2005 )





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