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What does blue mean to me?
It's the color of the sky
and sea.
Eyes are blue-
sapphires too
and at times
I am too.

What does brown mean to me?
It's the color of earth
and coffee.
Eyes are brown-
smoky quartz too
And brown I
yearn for when
missing you.



------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "Blue And Brown"
by Char

Blue and Brown
Simple and easy to fit myself into. I could empathize, easily, with the speaker.

( Posted by: Dfortyseven [Member] On: June 14, 2005 )

Char, Blue/Brown...
I've always liked this poem of yours. Sounds fitting for many wonderful things, relationships of all types can fit into this....each reader will find something of their own in this. Which I find is a wonderful way to write, that others can share.

Blues of the sky, sea and sapphires.
Browns of earth, coffee and quartz.

LIFE has given us some beautific wonders to write of.......love this.

Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 14, 2005 )





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