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A work in progress
sometimes forward, sometimes back
And then there are those times
I try desparately to not move at all
That never works
I keep trying though.

My own worst enemy, raging, pointing, mocking
The world may be my oyster but for one
I hate oysters
I'm allergic.
My biting sarcasm wonders why anyone would
want the world to be an oyster?
The writer in me reminds my sarcasm that
I digress and to get
back to the point.

Oh, gentle reader, you should know
I rarely get to the point

Jewel L

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The following comments are for "Me--Part 1"
by JewelL

Me part 1
I like what your saying. Are you going to have more parts?

( Posted by: ZonerZone [Member] On: June 12, 2005 )

me part 1
Jewel, I love this one. it is different, and i like being different
Nice job.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: June 12, 2005 )

Me part 1
I don't know. Maybe I'll write parts 4, 5, and 6, and then go back and do 2 and 3. Then say I had it all blocked out in college, and hint that 7, 8, and 9 are coming soon, and then say no, I'll never write again. Just kidding.
I think probably there will be more, I kind of like being able to just tackle the "me" thing in little pieces. That's about all I can handle of myself at a time so I should extend the same courtesy to the reader. :-)
Thanks for the comments thus far!

( Posted by: JewelL [Member] On: June 13, 2005 )

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