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Dim become the days
Richness dispair glory gone
Don't go my Hero.....


Robinbird


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The following comments are for "My Daddy..."
by Robinbird

Daddy

Touching subject Robin, I always like your haiku,
although some of them a bit abstract (which I think is good).

I wish I felt that way about my sperm donor.

Nice,

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: June 11, 2005 )

Haiku
yeah as time goes on as we know donesn't necasarily heal all wponds but it does make for some descent writting.
mike

( Posted by: lamemansterms [Member] On: June 11, 2005 )

macbeth&Lame...
My Father is not doing well...he is my #1 hero of all time...he's made many mistake's, but that is not irrelevent at this point...

having been a nurse I know not what to do(DESPARATE)...

Thank you both for thinking of Robin...

Robinbird

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: June 11, 2005 )

Damn IT!
chick can spell, just hurting...meant "revelent"
Thanks Much...

macbeth, Haiku can be extremely hard, tough...
difficult to get the point across in few words...

thanks for hanging in with me...
Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: June 11, 2005 )

I'm hanging...Robin


I realize that haiku is difficult, as is the Shakespearean sonnet. Sometimes free verse is the best way to write about certain subjects such as emotions. I admire those that can compress a message in such few words.

Iím hanging

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: June 11, 2005 )

macbeth...
hi, hello, and all that good stuff...

has "my" baby been born yet?

macbeth, aka Laura, thanks for your friendship,
and can't wait till SEE you again...

you, my friend, keep those words humming!

it's good stuff!

Robinbird

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: June 11, 2005 )

frienship

No baby yet, I've tried calling you but no answer.
Did you guys develop the film yet?

Anyway, I had a great time, and will be coming down soon.

Your friend,

Laura aka macbeth

P.S. maybe we should PM each other.

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: June 11, 2005 )





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