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Depression

The sudden descent
No hope of ascent
Nothing to say
Permanent grey
Once Laudanum
Now Librium,
Prozac and Valium
Pills
For ills
That don't exist
Death has kissed
And I am smitten
My end is written
The 'How' matters not
I just need it to stop


You want
To make it better
To make it seem better!
But
To understand better
You have to care




------
Damian Hutchinson


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The following comments are for "Depression"
by Tarquers

Depression
Very nice. 3 reads now and I like it. Look forward to more! On to your next.

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: June 10, 2005 )

Damian/DEPRESSION
Nice to meet you, Damian...I want to relate...
I can relate, every word and thought...I'm one of those of us< damn it! that know where you are coming from...nice to see you on the playground,
I've, personally been, not well, lately...stay with us, you will find some great, good gentle, hearts here at THE lit. org., i've learned much...bring your intestinal fortitude with you, you will need it here at this home of most talented writer's, because sometimes we MIX it up...let it show you growth, and my friend it will...

good write........Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: June 10, 2005 )





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