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A bit of found poetry, I'll include the image of it as well as the text.

Broken Girl

Genius, or useless?-- drugs for which
She wished upon a star, with an expiration date.
That sweet little thing, terror on canvas
May not be the ultimate punishment--
Restorer of faith isn't always honor bound.
Home is where
The atomic meltdown
Slips through. What has been the fallout?
A war over life
Shoot first
This is not your fight.

She falls softly down from towering pedastools...

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by shefallssoftly

Broken Girl
makes sense Omega to Alpha...

( Posted by: Judi1 [Member] On: July 19, 2005 )

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