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Quiet splashes roll

in perpetual motion

Over river rock


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California
Uber Alles


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The following comments are for "Haiku V"
by skulduggery

Skul" has returned!
Skul- Ground control has been trying to contact you. Glad to see you are safe.

Compression. Yes.

Nicely done,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 9, 2005 )

Thank you
bobby7l: thank you for your compliment. compression is good in its efficiency, therefore a nice comment to receive on a haiku. i see you in long form regarding 'dancing machine'. reminds me of 'video killed the radio star'.

( Posted by: skulduggery [Member] On: June 9, 2005 )

haiku V/spiders from mars

I agree with BobbyL7, nice piece, good compression.

However, was it Major Tom that contacted you or the Spiders from Mars? (lol)

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: June 10, 2005 )

Thank You
jorgeluis: thank you for your compliment. i try.

macbeth: thank you. i think it would have to be the spiders. ground control tried to contact major tom. that would make me tom. i would rather be ziggy stardust.

tap5000: how humbling. thank you. more than a master of it, am i not a slave to it?

( Posted by: skulduggery [Member] On: June 10, 2005 )

SkulHASreturned...
My goodness, skul, deep one or high one, like that thought better...been away myself, but, from the stars this is intensly rockin'...I love haiku, you give this justice, from the Myku standpoint(refer to Nitz Kitty, on Myku)...
nice to see you around, space cadet(repectfully)...

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: June 10, 2005 )





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