"Ground control to Major Tom..."
Dfortyseven- Once again, seems like beginning of something. Questions. Alright, tell us a story.
As it reads, it doesn't "fire" me anywhere.
Just found your work, so to be fair, I will read a few more. Maybe I'm missing something. I'm all about compression. Concise and pithy is good, but you have to tell a story, or something. Maybe you could tell some stories from the "voyage."
typical, I read a world in this, due to my experiences only...for me, this tells a story,
a write that I can relate to...D47, most times or let's say many times my writes, come out
intended only for myself, 'cause I'm the only one that knows what I'm talking about...
not making comparison of you to me...
this write of yours has sturdy ground, and is
Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: June 12, 2005
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