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Hit no man!
for you dont want do it
he like you feels the pain
how come when at him so strong
You strike him by the face
chop his legs to cripple he
have mercy and let him stay!

for you want his piece
Of.a jewelry that him craves it too
and his sleeping place
you want take it too
this man shall,must come to you
bergging low,pitiful!
But you shameless his face shall smush
and mumble `poor you leave me at peace`

tommorow morn he
shall come at your bed
you so fast asleep
tiptoeing in silent
with a glittering sword
raised up high and cut your neck
He`go to hell`shall curse you


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