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In a matter of seconds, there was a lot of me
Little pieces, of me
Lying everywhere and he could not stop it
On time
And now
I am stuck between the 2 world’s
Forever, in this town
Forever in the cold dark waste of eternity
My soul still bounded in chains
To the earth
Why am I, not in heaven or hell
Why am I
In the worst place someone can only imagine
But why am I here
Why haven’t the gods or the servants of the devil
Not yet grabt me
To take me to the places of life or dead
Maybe because of what I did to me self
When I stood on the two iron rails
And when it came with an awesome speed towards me
Maybe that’s the reason why I am here
Between the two world’s
Because I did it to me self, and not someone else
It is my own fault that I am still Bounded in chains Of agony, hatred, sorrow, grief, anger
And solitary
I only see me self and no other
I have put this curse on me self
And now I must live with it and face it
Again like I did in life
And now I am stuck with the chains again
Maybe this is my destiny, maybe not
But who can tell
That I will and was forever stuck on another chain
A Desperate Chain


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