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He was born on the green coast of Greece,
and it was a rebel wind
that blew him here,
to this Puritan land
where the satyrs chatter
and their flute song
is all but drowned out
by the factory bell.
Though he never really took root
and the outside of his cup was often dirty,
especially in his cups,
he was a true lilac of the field.
They say he was violent in his fleeting flowerings;
They thought his unmitigated purple vulgar.
I can't deny these things,
but never was a flower sweeter or a friend more generous.
Though he wouldn't have seen the wisdom of breaking a babe in two,
(I must confess I do,)
he would take them in his lap and sing to them.
Well, the time came to plant the field
and they transported him away
to a white desert
where the seasons never change.
They won't even let me send him his flute.
The judge should have been a farmer
because he can't recognize beauty in a wildflower.
Guilty though he may be,
my friend Pete
simply can't grow through concrete.







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The following comments are for "A Lilac of the Field"
by seanspacey

Very Refreshing
Seanspacey;
I enjoyed this very much..got a great imagery of this too.

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: June 6, 2005 )

Lilac Fielder
Excellent Sean. I really enjoy your work. You have a wonderful turn of phrase and an imaginative mind.
cheers
mick

( Posted by: Smithy [Member] On: June 7, 2005 )

I confess
I've read this four times now and I'd better comment. The title dragged me in and the content didn't disappoint.

( Posted by: Penelope [Member] On: June 8, 2005 )

thanks
Thanks to all who commented and also those who read this poem. Penelope, that has to be the hippest avatar ever.
This poem's about my friend Pete, who's been in prison for two years now and will serve at least three more. Pete followed The Grateful Dead for years before he moved to the college town of Ashland, OR, where we were friends. He was convicted of raping the mother of his child, who was leaving him. Just yesterday, I read her a couple kids' books; she seems to be doing well.

( Posted by: seanspacey [Member] On: June 8, 2005 )

Sean's lilac
Sean this is fantastic, it floats about but is strong enough to take us readers with it.

Thank you for sharing this piece.

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: June 8, 2005 )

londongrey
I'm so glad to hear you like this poem. And I'm sorry about that piece: "to any dying police officer;" I removed it a few months ago. Peace

( Posted by: seanspacey [Member] On: June 8, 2005 )

A lilac of the Field
Seanspacey;

I kinda figured that was what you were talking about... a friend in prison, but I did not want to say anything, if you had not mentioned it.. I got an great imagery of it, because I have a close relative that is in prison, and will be there until GOD see him through it. and there are things that They said I could not send him, like a Bible, it has to come from a publisher. Never stop praying for your friend..Prayer is powerful


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: June 8, 2005 )





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