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Like a tumbleweed
my mind wanders recklessly
who created GOD.

`always write poetry, Cheryl

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The following comments are for "Like a tumbleweed..maybe Senyra?"
by ladyngold

ladyngold's pondering
Cheryl- I post my 3/5/3's, 5/7/5's and 5/7/5/7/7's as "poetry." When I arrived here last December, I found several writers posting humourous little examples of above. I followed suit, with a dozen or so, but then decided to start posting as "poems." ("Senryupsyched," as I call them.)..That was/is my choice.

One of good things about this wondrous site, is freedom to decide where and how to post your creations.

Good read,
Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 5, 2005 )

like tumbleweed

Good read, "who created God" is a good question. I have my own theories, but I'll keep them to myself. Your poem is short and beautiful.


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: June 5, 2005 )

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